Post by Leo de Seis on May 29, 2009 12:14:08 GMT -7
This is about Dani Graves. He is a serial killer who joins the team in order to defeat Deep Blue. Please write and tell me what you think.
Rated: M(17+) Strong language(censored), extreme gore themes, DANI FILTH!!!!!!!
Chapter 1: Prey
It was midnight. The neighbourhood was asleep. A dodgy streetlamp flickered on and off. Then out of the shadows, came a sound, like a boot and the clank of metal. A mysterious man stepped into the light. He wore full black and had strange rings on, they looked like claws. He strolled down the street, all the children watching this scary man from their bedroom windows. He walked into a house, the lights were still on. There was an argument between a husband and wife. The argument grew when the husband started to beat his wife up. Dani walked up behind the man and shoved his hand through the man's stomach. Revealing his internal organs. He then put his claws around his neck and clenched and quickly pulled his arms outward slicing the man's head off. His wife was unconscious. Dani left the house and continued his hunt. He felt a blow to his head and turned around and two men were beating him up with baseball bats. He fell to the ground and pretended to be dead.
"Check his wallet." said the one thug,
The other thug was searching Dani's pockets. Dani opened his eyes and grabbed the thug by his throat. The man stood there gagging and choking.
"Holy sh*t! How is that possible!" shouted the thug,
Dani dug his claws into his neck and tore out his throat.
"You f**king monster!" shouted the other thug swinging his bat at him,
Dani grabbed the bat, broke it and grabbed the man's head. He dug his claws into his skull and ripped his head apart. When the man fell to the ground Dani stomped on his brain. There was an audible squishing sound. He kept on walking leaving behind bits and pieces of brain and blood. He heard loud rap music. A car was speeding. Even though the windows were tinted he could see the inside the car. There were 3 men. One was driving, the other was sleeping the other had a gun. There was something else. Someone in the trunk although he couldn't make it out.
"Look at dat fool!" said the driver,
"Ride his ass flat!" said the one with the gun,
Dani stood there and clenched his fist. When the car was close enough he punched the hood and it came to a dead halt. He grabbed the bumper and flipped the car over and back onto it's wheels again. He walked to the driver's side and punched the door. He ripped open the passenger door and grabbed the sleeping man, punched him in the face and gouged his eyes out. The man was lying on the floor screaming.
"You f**ker!" shouted the armed man,
Dani turned and the man jumped and slid on the roof of the car and kicked Dani in the face. The man then opened fire. Dani started to take hits, he didn't grunt or scream. The man stopped firing and saw Dani try and keep his balance. Dani looked up and teleported behind the man. He stuck his claws through his eyes and began to pull. The top of his skull came off and he ripped his brain out. He threw it on the ground and spat into the man's empty skull. He ripped open the trunk. There was a lady with her hands cuffed behind her back and a bank bag over her head. He pulled the bag off and ripped the tape of of her mouth and broke the cuffs. She got out of the trunk and saw the dead bodies and looked at Dani all covered in blood, turned around and ran away screaming. He left the neighbourhood. The next morning, the police were all over the show. The detectives were baffled at the headless man. The wife didn't kill him because she was unconscious and couldn't remember a thing. Meanwhile, two cops were puking into buckets provided by the coroner at the sight of the two men with baseball bats.
"The first one had his throat ripped out, the other had his head ripped in half and someone appears to have stomped on his brain." said the coroner.
"This man is sick." said the chief.
They were also investigating the three men in the car. The driver's ribs had broken off and punctured his lungs. You know what happened to the other two. Meanwhile, at Cafe Mew Mew Elliot and Wesley were listening to this on the news on the radio.
"That's pretty gruesome." said Elliot,
Then the phone rang. Elliot answered it,
"Hello?"
"Hello there Mr. Grant." said a voice,
"Who are you? How do you know my name?"
"Just a concerned man. I was a friend of your late father."
"You know my dad?"
"We used to work together." while they were talking, Dani had in his left hand the phone receiver and in his right a pear. Dani took a bite of the pear,
"What do you mean 'worked together'?"
"Exactly what I said, I know of his research on Red Data Animals and their DNA being found in humans as well. What's it called? Red DNA?"
"WHO ARE YOU?"
"Like I said, a concerned man. It would be a shame if all your research just, vanished and the whole world knew about it."
"Is that a threat."
"No, a warning. I can prevent that."
"What do you mean?"
"I mean I can help you." said a voice behind him, he turned around very quickly and saw Dani still holding the half-eaten pear with a malicious grin on his face.
"How......it's not possible." gasped Elliot,
"I can help you locate the five people you are looking for."
"How?"
"I know all sorts of things. You heard about my deeds on the radio?"
"YOU did all that?"
"Yes."
"Why?"
"Because I HATE evil people and I'm just doing the world a favour by wiping them clean off the face of this Earth."
Elliot was silent,
"Do we have a deal Mr. Grant?" said Dani extending his arm,
Elliot looked at him and shook his hand.
"We have a deal, Mr.?"
"Graves, Dani Graves." said Dani grinning.
End of Chapter 1
Rated: M(17+) Strong language(censored), extreme gore themes, DANI FILTH!!!!!!!
Chapter 1: Prey
It was midnight. The neighbourhood was asleep. A dodgy streetlamp flickered on and off. Then out of the shadows, came a sound, like a boot and the clank of metal. A mysterious man stepped into the light. He wore full black and had strange rings on, they looked like claws. He strolled down the street, all the children watching this scary man from their bedroom windows. He walked into a house, the lights were still on. There was an argument between a husband and wife. The argument grew when the husband started to beat his wife up. Dani walked up behind the man and shoved his hand through the man's stomach. Revealing his internal organs. He then put his claws around his neck and clenched and quickly pulled his arms outward slicing the man's head off. His wife was unconscious. Dani left the house and continued his hunt. He felt a blow to his head and turned around and two men were beating him up with baseball bats. He fell to the ground and pretended to be dead.
"Check his wallet." said the one thug,
The other thug was searching Dani's pockets. Dani opened his eyes and grabbed the thug by his throat. The man stood there gagging and choking.
"Holy sh*t! How is that possible!" shouted the thug,
Dani dug his claws into his neck and tore out his throat.
"You f**king monster!" shouted the other thug swinging his bat at him,
Dani grabbed the bat, broke it and grabbed the man's head. He dug his claws into his skull and ripped his head apart. When the man fell to the ground Dani stomped on his brain. There was an audible squishing sound. He kept on walking leaving behind bits and pieces of brain and blood. He heard loud rap music. A car was speeding. Even though the windows were tinted he could see the inside the car. There were 3 men. One was driving, the other was sleeping the other had a gun. There was something else. Someone in the trunk although he couldn't make it out.
"Look at dat fool!" said the driver,
"Ride his ass flat!" said the one with the gun,
Dani stood there and clenched his fist. When the car was close enough he punched the hood and it came to a dead halt. He grabbed the bumper and flipped the car over and back onto it's wheels again. He walked to the driver's side and punched the door. He ripped open the passenger door and grabbed the sleeping man, punched him in the face and gouged his eyes out. The man was lying on the floor screaming.
"You f**ker!" shouted the armed man,
Dani turned and the man jumped and slid on the roof of the car and kicked Dani in the face. The man then opened fire. Dani started to take hits, he didn't grunt or scream. The man stopped firing and saw Dani try and keep his balance. Dani looked up and teleported behind the man. He stuck his claws through his eyes and began to pull. The top of his skull came off and he ripped his brain out. He threw it on the ground and spat into the man's empty skull. He ripped open the trunk. There was a lady with her hands cuffed behind her back and a bank bag over her head. He pulled the bag off and ripped the tape of of her mouth and broke the cuffs. She got out of the trunk and saw the dead bodies and looked at Dani all covered in blood, turned around and ran away screaming. He left the neighbourhood. The next morning, the police were all over the show. The detectives were baffled at the headless man. The wife didn't kill him because she was unconscious and couldn't remember a thing. Meanwhile, two cops were puking into buckets provided by the coroner at the sight of the two men with baseball bats.
"The first one had his throat ripped out, the other had his head ripped in half and someone appears to have stomped on his brain." said the coroner.
"This man is sick." said the chief.
They were also investigating the three men in the car. The driver's ribs had broken off and punctured his lungs. You know what happened to the other two. Meanwhile, at Cafe Mew Mew Elliot and Wesley were listening to this on the news on the radio.
"That's pretty gruesome." said Elliot,
Then the phone rang. Elliot answered it,
"Hello?"
"Hello there Mr. Grant." said a voice,
"Who are you? How do you know my name?"
"Just a concerned man. I was a friend of your late father."
"You know my dad?"
"We used to work together." while they were talking, Dani had in his left hand the phone receiver and in his right a pear. Dani took a bite of the pear,
"What do you mean 'worked together'?"
"Exactly what I said, I know of his research on Red Data Animals and their DNA being found in humans as well. What's it called? Red DNA?"
"WHO ARE YOU?"
"Like I said, a concerned man. It would be a shame if all your research just, vanished and the whole world knew about it."
"Is that a threat."
"No, a warning. I can prevent that."
"What do you mean?"
"I mean I can help you." said a voice behind him, he turned around very quickly and saw Dani still holding the half-eaten pear with a malicious grin on his face.
"How......it's not possible." gasped Elliot,
"I can help you locate the five people you are looking for."
"How?"
"I know all sorts of things. You heard about my deeds on the radio?"
"YOU did all that?"
"Yes."
"Why?"
"Because I HATE evil people and I'm just doing the world a favour by wiping them clean off the face of this Earth."
Elliot was silent,
"Do we have a deal Mr. Grant?" said Dani extending his arm,
Elliot looked at him and shook his hand.
"We have a deal, Mr.?"
"Graves, Dani Graves." said Dani grinning.
End of Chapter 1